Magical Shoes Poem – Moral Poems
Magical Shoes Poem
We always need something to remind us who we are and how we should treat others in this short life. The shoes in this poem represent the potential we have to make the world a better place.
Let the poem do the talking 🙂
Magical Shoes
Everybody has a pair of shoes
That makes anger disappear
They turn hate into love
Make you brave, not to fear
They lead your feet to the homeless
So that you can make their day
Make the world a nicer place
To live in and to stay
With them, you are not selfish
But all you try to do is give
Make you realize that life is short
So we should all simply live
Everyone has these shoes
No bodies have ever gone
So why do some thoughtless people
Not put their shoes on?
© 2010 Marinela Reka
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Nice reminder – I’m going for a walk today if it’s the last thing I do…
You really rock….what a way to push people to GIVE..
God gives
And man lives
And the man who gives
In him god lives…
What a delightful poem. I really like the concept of a certain pair of shoes that bring out the best of us. It’s a complex idea so simply created – thanks for this, and thanks also for visiting my blog.
Shines to inspire,the Magical Shoes.Thank you:)
really a wonderful verse with a great point…putting on my shoes today…
Well done. I am most definitely going to find my shoes today and put them on when I go out. Wonderful work – keep up the great writing skills.
Nationtips
a pleasant poem to read…:)
(ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)
The stray dogs roaming
On the streets in the market stalls
All alone finding food to survive
The breeding then the owners throw away
In the day; in the night
It makes no difference when need to survive
Sniffing food throwing on the floor or streets
Sometimes rummaging around in the dustbins
The stray dogs fear in their eyes
Any significant goodness seems gone
In the dogs’ minds surviving is the game
Sniffing around care not what people say
Study the dogs the significant of human lives
When you are poor, living hands to mouths
The fear of the unknown always linger in their minds
Dare not aggressively pursuing afraid to know
The rejection and run down of dignity
It breaks a person losing control
Living in fear when money is the game
Without it what life will be?
To turn around life
One has to forget
The background of a living
Try it harder forget about letdown
It is still holding true
“No venture no gain”
One shouldn’t be a stray dog
Losing all hope for a home
12/4/10 10.42pm take care
Thank You everyone for all off your time! You are putting your magical shoes on by leaving me such meaningful refreshing comments! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem and I am very grateful for you compliments!
Caravanserai I really loved your poem! It was full of emotion and very touching! Very well done your great! 😀
Thank you all!
Marinela! x
a wonderful poem
Deadline – Decline
wonderful idea – I’m going to go put my shoes on now 🙂
I have a pair of those shoes. Not the colorful ones like in your post. It would be nice if more people would wear theirs. Like you say, “we all have a pair”. Unfortunately to many people shove them in the back of their closet. Nice post
Old Grizz you are so true! Some people do shove them in the back of their closet but i hope they have got the power to take them out and put them on as soon as possible! Before they like being barefoot 🙂
Thank you for commenting 😀
I am glad that you liked it Adesi!
Ha Ha everyone should put their shoes on Dee 😀
Thank you guys 😀
I like the drawing of the cheery shoes. And your poem strolls along with joy.
Very cool…
…rob
Image & Verse
aww.. this is inspiring 🙂
Yes! Good reminder…
Modesty aside my dear, I feel like I am always using that magical shoes and it gives me immeasurable pleasure after extending kind deeds!
This is lovely, hun! It’s definitely inspiring and really gets you thinking about what you have done and are doing in life. And it makes you ponder and to be sure that you’re always selfless and not selfish.
Very thought provoking even though it’s very simple to grasp. Thanks for sharing, sweets. 🙂
what a lovely idea, the magical shoes!
I am so pleased you all liked my poem,
And the bright image of the trainers 🙂
I guess it does make us think about life more!
Thank you all for the heartwarming comments!
I wish you all the best 🙂
Marinela
I had just run into the word cinquain and had planned to look it up. Since I came by here I found out. What a wonderful place is blogland.
QMM
Thanks,
I am glad that you like it QMM
Marinela! 😀
Shoes are very comfortable, soft, warm, and protect you from the elements.
If people would be like shoes helping and protecting those around them,the world most certainly would benefit a lot.
(As long as there are no strings attached lol)
🙂
I like your unique approach — shoes rather than feet.
You’ve put to action the heart. Very nice. Thank you for sharing it.
Why indeed? Very inspiring and a good reminder for us all.
I love the way you inspire us with your words. It reminds us all to ‘put on our shoes’ and do something good today.
Have a great Wednesday! Thanks for stopping by.
I am old enough to be your grandmother. I see you were born in ’96..
good morning Marinela~ i’m sorry for my late reply on your blog. my computer has been in and out since Friday. i think i’m back online for awhile, grin.
your poem is very inspirational. giving to another is the heart of what makes the world go round. we never know how we’re going to touch someone’s life because of our giving. it can only turn out good.
i also love the drawing. beautifully rendered. hope all is well. have a great day.
Hey, that was beautiful n pleasant!Keep it up.
also wld like to invite you to my page at:
http://www.assorted-platter.blogspot.com
ur opinion wld be invaluable!tx.
hahaha that’s true alady’slife the world would benefit! I am grateful that you visited my blog, thanks!
I am glad you liked the poem Yousei and Robin! I really appreciate your comments!
Patti you are putting on your magical shoes by leaving me such a lovely comment! Many thanks. Is my pleasure to stop by 😀
Its no problem Naquillity don’t worry about it! Thanks for taking time to visit my page and i am very thankful for your great comment!
Thank you pravin! I will stop by your page!
WOW everyone its heartwarming to know that so many people like my poetry! Thank you all so much for making my day! 😀
All the best Marinela x
hi ? I ‘ve added your blog to my blogroll if you don’t mind cos I want to keep track of your poems.good luck.
Yeah cool! those shoes can make you walk a mile in the opposite direction. well said, we all need a good kicking sometimes!
This is splendid…really is…cheers!
Great! Thank you wordwand of course i don’t mind, i am very grateful! 🙂
Hahaha very true Andy we all do! Thanks for the lovely comment!
I am glad that you enjoyed it Emmanuel, thank you for taking your time to write the comment! 😀
Thank you all!
Marinela!x
its nice to see such a beauty and thought in your words, and a passion for thought provoking poetry so early.. beautifully written..
Cute sketch and a cute poem 🙂
Enjoyed reading it. 🙂
Love the shoes and what your poem does for them or is it what the shoes do for the poem
Nicely done!!!
Great poem.
Wearing slippers at the moment as I’m not too well. Looking forward to putting my shoes on by the weekend.
Nuts in May
What a lovely sentiment. Wouldn’t the world be a beautiful palce? I try to wear mine each day. You did a great job with this.
I have a pair indeed. They are purple! Good work.
I like the way that I could walk along on this one. Very nice poem and well written. 🙂 Have fun today.
Thank you everyone!
Yes your right Suzicate the world would be a better place 🙂
Your all so kind leaving such lovely comments it has made me very joyful this holiday! I am glad that you all liked it 😀
Once again Thank you!
Warmly
Marinela!
x
Thanks, I am thrilled to meet another poet around my age… although I am just starting (compared to you… wow!). I really love this website design. I was wondering if I could add you to my “Poet Friends & Other Links” section on my blog? If you accept and feel so enclined… you could add me to 🙂
Thanks,
Mitchell
Wow, this is an absolute delight. 🙂 I loved the entire poem, and these words, especially: “Make you realise that life is short
So we should all simply live.”
I love this!
I always keep my shoes next to my rose colored glasses. Those shoes and shades are the best accessories.
Cute poem! It’s great to introduce little kids to the world of poetry so they can learn to express themselves! Thanks!
@caravanserai, Your poem reminds me of a song by the Be Good Tanyas; it’s called “Dogsong.” Lovely.
@Marinela, This is a sweet poem. I like the way you’ve used shoes, which are the necessities of travel. And we are all traveling through this life. Also, your blog is beautiful. Nice design!
I am glad that you liked it Mitchell, feel free to add my website 😀
It would be great! Thanks for the comment!
I really do feel much better to see all of the lovely comments you all leave! I am very glad to see that you all liked my magical shoes poem! And thank you for spending your time to comment on my work 🙂
Marinela x
Such a delightful, delightful site Marinela! I’m coming back again! 🙂
Thank you for the lovely comment Avanti! 😀
Marinela x
I enjoyed also visiting here …
I love poems !!
Lovely blog 🙂
Have a fantastic weekend
Kareltje =^.^=
Anya 🙂
Thank you Anya 😀
I am so happy you like it 🙂
I hope you have lovely weekend too
Marinela x
beautiful poem! Thx!
Cute poem. I love shoes more than bag, but yeah, we have to use our “shoes” to do good deeds.
Lots of love,
Thank you Wenn and Golden 🙂
I am happy you liked it
Ha ha ha yes we do need our ‘shoes’ to do good deeds 😀
Marinela! x
fantastic.
Thanks Trisha 🙂
love it! in fact i have a few poems on shoes myself- drop in anytime..
Such a delightful, delightful site Marinela! I’m coming back again! 🙂
fantastic poem.
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enjoy some!
Such a delightful, delightful site Marinela! I’m coming back again! 🙂
Amazing work marinela!
Such a delightful, delightful site Marinela! I’m coming back again! 🙂
Great poem and a cool way to get across its message. I do administrative work for a coalition of child welfare agencies, and I can imagine this as a book or a poster I’d see at them. Thank you!
Thank You everyone for your kind comments. I am so grateful!
Lawrence C if you do want to use my poem: feel free. As long as you put my name on it so people know it was written by me.
I am so glad to know that my poem could help younger children.
Thank you Lawrence 🙂
Warmly Marinela x x
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Wonderful poem, I loved its beautiful and timeless message. “So we should all simply live”…how many of us forget to do that. I shall definitely try to wear my special shoes all the time.
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