Peacock – Cinquain Poem
A cinquain is a short poem with 5 lines. The theme of the poem is a noun and the rest of it is written to describe that noun. This is the structure it follows:
First Line: A noun that is the subject of the poem as well as the title.
Second Line: Two words (Adjectives) that describe the title/noun.
Third Line: Three ‘ing’ words that also describe the noun.
Forth Line: A phrase with four words that relate to the noun.
Fifth Line: A synonym for the noun in the first line.
Peacock
Peacock
Vivid, elegant
Shimmering, sparkling, strutting
A profound natural sight
beauty
© 2010 Marinela Reka
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Hi Marinela
Thanks for paying me a visit.
So nice to be here at your blog.
You are so young but have such talent!
Great job on this poem!
Margie 🙂
What a lovely site you have. Your peacock cinquain is clever. Have you ever seen a white peacock? The males can have a single blue eye in their tales.
Thank you for visiting my site and leaving a comment. Glad you liked the short poems, rabbits and blogging. Hope you’ll stop by whenever fancy strikes you.
I’m quite fond of Cinquains and yours is very nice!
Lovely blog.
Thanks.
Take care.
Wow….u are so young and have already written a book!!
Thats awesome .
By the way , my sister is also born on 1996!
Take care
Nice blog and cute peacock.
Thank you.
Thank you for stopping by my blog. You cannot believe the excitement I felt when I came to yours and saw “Cinquain”. You see that was my very first introduction in fourth grade to writing poetry, and it was love at first sight. I plan to do a post about it sometime.
thanks for visiting my site. I love ur poems esp. this one on peacocks!!
sonali
Poem
Beautiful, eloquent
Refreshing, warming, heartening
A very thoughtful depiction
Wow!
Hi Marinela .. good to meet you and thanks for the visit to my blog – the Peacock poem and picture are great – especially now that it is Spring like here in England ..
All the best Hilary
Thank you everybody!
I am glad that you all liked my peacock cinquain!
No i have never seen a white peacock but it sounds so cool! I would love to come across one some time! 🙂
I love to visit all your blogs its my pleasure! thank you all for providing me with something fun to do!! 🙂
Ramesh your poem is very cleaver and well written, well done! i really liked it!
Once again thank you!
Marinela x 🙂
The structure of a cinquain is rather amazing. I love your peacock verse. Now I have to try this! I’ll have to try one! Did I get it correct? Did I make a cinquain? (crossing fingers here!)
Jack Pine
Silent Sentinel
freezing streching bending
Algonquin Coniferous
A Resplendent tree most fine
Hi there Marinela
Thanks for your comment on my Blog 🙂
I find your poems really so refreshing…you are such a talented young girl. I am your fan now on Facebook 🙂
a lovely poem to go with your photo~
Lovely cinquain, very well written!
Hi Marinela,
I’m amazed at your poetic talent. So young and so gifted!!
Thanks for visiting my blog and for teaching me something – the meaning of ‘cinquain’.
Thanks Marinela, for your good words.. I feel emboldened to find you among the followers on my blog… you know it is amazing to see your writings at such a young age.. I can only imagine the maturity they would carry about 35 years from now…when you will be my age.. hope to read you more and more.. keep moving ahead, keep growing and glowing… God Bless…
wow..i never saw something like that before..very interesting..btw..thanks ^_^
ill follow you now..hope you too as well :_)
I like cinquains!
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It is indeed – and well described.
Love your poem and shot…how perfect! I like cinquains…
Jane, your poem is great! The only thing that is not like a cinquain poem is that the forth line should have 4 words 😀 but it was very good well done!
Lazy pineapple thanks for becoming a fan of my page, i have become a fan of yours 😀
Thank you all! Your compliments are so encouraging and always make me happy 😀 I am so grateful!
Hugs
Marinela x
it is amazingly beautiful!
what a talent!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/
I did mine the first time,
I would appreciate your feedback!
Thanks Ji, i am glad you liked it!
I would love to give my feedback! 😀
Marinela! x
Beautiful!
keep it up. God bless u.
Hey you,
Thank you for your kind comment on my weblog! I like your weblog, and your poems. Keep it up! You’re good! 🙂
Thanks Harshad and Desiree for your kind comments 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/follow-jingle-to-make-your-blog-twinkle-awards/
awards for you.
Happy Sunday!
Thanks Ji 🙂
it’s my first time here and i am truly amazed! i am really impressed. you have such great talent MARINELA. i will surely be back for more. 🙂
it’s my first time here and i am truly amazed! i am really impressed. you have such great talent MARINELA. i will surely be back for more. 🙂
Hey you, I like your weblog, and your poems. Keep it up! You’re good! 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/
I did mine the first time,
I would appreciate your feedback!
it’s my first time here and i am truly amazed! i am really impressed. you have such great talent MARINELA. i will surely be back for more. 🙂
Valuable page. Lucky me I found your site by accident, I love it.
Hi there!
Thank you so much for following my blog…
I am so glad I hopped in here..that was a beautiful cinquain on a beautiful bird…( U know Peacock is our national Bird, the country I come from, India)
U have simply n so wonderfully captured the beauty in these five lines..
i also come to know that ur very young…such a young lady as you n writing well…a good accomplishment indeed….
Keep it up n keep writing 🙂
I like your use of forms– some new ones for me!
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nice one
I luvvvvv ur poems ,can u make one for limericks!!:)
:D:D:D:D:D Never mind!!!
Wow. I loved learning about the Cinquain Poems. I’ll have to go and try some.
Thanks for the poetry lesson:~)
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