Ironic poem

by • February 6, 2010 • Feeling Poems, Freestyle Poems, Inspirational Poems, Ironic Poems, Simply The Best, Winter PoemsComments (19)8170

Ironic Poem

Ironic Poem – Freestyle Poems

Beautiful liar!

If when there are elections
The beautiful snow was taking part
My desirable fascination for it
Would bring joy to my young heart

The unique individual snowflakes
The frosted and alabaster white coat
The delight of seeing everyone merry
Snow, you have definitely got my vote

My soul feels alive as I see the blissful sight
And my lungs breathe as I smell the fresh air
My eyes tingle as the flakes drift down
And charmingly land on my soft hair

But when the sun shines and the rain falls
The absolutely brilliant snow starts to melt
I begin to see that nothing is perfect
And no longer feel the same feelings I felt!

The snow I fell in love with has gone
Instead of left some slippery, stubborn thick ice
It is no longer safe to drive or to walk
So next time I vote I have to think twice!

It turns out to be a miserable misfortune
And not the utterly beautiful snow we desire
It just looks like what we adore and love
Is nothing but a very beautiful liar!

ยฉ 2010 Marinela Reka

Ironic poem

Ironic poem

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19 Responses to Ironic Poem

  1. Finn Halligan says:

    One of your finest m’dear. The poem truly represents all that is “zen” about life

  2. Hootin' Anni says:

    I skimmed through your poetry today….you’re most talented!!!!

    Thanks for stopping by my blog Saturday and leaving such a sweet, sweet comment.

    Have a great week ahead.

  3. Akelamalu says:

    LOL you summed it up perfectly!

    Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Naqvee says:

    Hi there Ms Marinela Reka, sweetheart ! your poetry and your style is quite mesmerizing because at such a young age you are doing an incredible exercise of imagination, which is worth a mention! You are just 13 and I still can’t believe it! hats off to you young lady..

    furthermore, is there a way I can see your new and future posts, though I will be visiting you often this week because I will read what you wrote in past!

    Thanks for coming over my blog and wishing me ! your wishes are precious and I will keep ’em safe…

    lots of love…
    Naqvee โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    p.s . I have never seen snow “real one” .. but from your post I can feel How i will feel when I will see it for the first time, if i ever get a chance

  5. Icy BC says:

    Such wonderful poem! I only like fresh snow too..

  6. Ebaayyyy ;) says:

    I love you and I love this xxxxxxxx
    Its soooo pretttyy <3

  7. mondi says:

    bravo laci ..

    one of my favs ๐Ÿ˜€

  8. Marinela says:

    Thanks for the great comments everyone!

    Naqvee you can subscribe to my RRS feed and stay up to date with all my poems, here is the link:

    Thank you again!

  9. Dee says:

    welcome to the wonderful wintry world of politics ๐Ÿ™‚ bravo!

  10. Like the 4th stanza! Feelings change, don’t they?
    You have talent! But I hope you’ll develop your skill in every way possible -also taking some classes and seeing what and how other writers do it would be another feather on your hat:)
    How did you find me?

  11. Yuki says:

    LOL!! :”P <3

  12. Sayak says:

    How beautifully you have brought out the commonest of human traits, the need, the desire and the vulnerability to change. Great poem! ๐Ÿ˜€

  13. Baha says:

    your poems is best

  14. yea nice Operate, love your poetry..

  15. Yep, you’re absolutely right. Excellent posting by the way, the title is descriptive and so easy to find:Short Poems – Marinela Reka .com » Blog Archive » Beautiful liar!

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