Forgiveness Poem – Feeling Poems
Forgiveness Poem
An angel named Forgiveness
Traveled from mind to mind
Teaching people how to move forward
And leave the past behind
She reminded them of their regrets
Taught that perfection is rare
And humanity makes mistakes
Despite their love and care
She tried to stay strong; hold her ground
But she was just not that tough
Soon to be replaced by anger and grudges
Because sorry was no longer enough
Forgiveness was soon out of the picture
As revenge suddenly became right
But she still traveled from mind to mind
Convincing them to see the light
© 2011 Marinela Reka
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This poem is absolutely beautiful! It comes at the right time, because I really needed to be reminded of the love that is forgiveness. Sometimes, it’s challenging to forgive a person who has hurt you in some way…but it is absolutely necessary to forgive in order to move forward in life. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem!
What a lovely image of roses to remind us of forgiveness..like glue for the foundation! Thank you:)
These poems and photographs go straight to the key issues of how we live and how we are, on our planet. They seem to me like songs of innocence and experience in the mode of William Blake and the photographs go very well. Beautiful.
Thanks for visiting my poem blog. I always appreciate your comments.
Nice one! Very powerful and evoked several images and emotions..
Fantastic poem Marinela, forgiveness vs anger/ revenge, its a hard one as we are all built so differently. Beautifully written and i’ll definitely be back to check out your other poems. If its ok with you i’ll also add your website address to my poetry blog (if thats ok :o) ?
So beautiful, Marinela, forgiveness is just as you described it here, like an angel
Very fine poem, Marinela. Forgiveness sometimes is difficult, but always so sublime.
Nice toughts about forgiveness
lovely words…nicely crafted lines!
remember what Mark Twain said, “Forgiveness is the fragrance that a violet sheds on the heel that crushes it.”
Well done Marinela..you picked up a sbuject very close to my heart.. keep visiting..
This poem is pretty amazing…one of my favorites from your work…Intriguing and unwavering
Beautiful words to convey the goodness of forgiving!!
Such wonderful words. To be able to forgive is such a gift, to be unable to forgive, in many ways, a torture that only really hurts the person unable to forgive.
HI Mari,
your poems are insights to the positive life which still somehwere chases away the negativities present in us.
The lesson of forgiveness the angel taught
is condemned always by the Satan’s thought
The more the angel will try to enlight
The more the Satan will capture the night
So..Its upto the humans to follow the lesson
to fan the agony or throw the weapon,
as to choose between them what is right
whether to forgive the other or let the revenge bite.
Love Naqvee♥
Very nice piece and I like the picture with it as well.
Hi, I’m not sure how you found my site? But i’m glad you came by, thanks so much for leaving your comment.
You write wonderful poems! I’ve really enjoyed reading some and will be back to see you again.
Have a great weekend too.
Nikki
Lovely thoughts, lovely words, nonetheless, lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!
Lovely spiritual poem, written with a loving delicate touch.
forgiveness and being able to forgive says so much about us as Human Beings…. Lovely poem. Many thanks for dropping by and for your comment, much appreciated… xPenx
Very nice poem/tale. Good message and entertaining storyline. Very nicely done, thanks for sharing
Simple words with feelings inside. I loved this good work… Waiting for more. 🙂
Beautiful poem! I loved the reminder that Forgiveness is always around…just waiting for us to choose her..to allow her in.
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I just love this poem, I had to come back again today to re-read it. Thanks for your comment on my blog, it is much appreciated. I have bookmarked this page and will pop by to read some more of your lovely poems 🙂
Very nice. Thanks for sharing .
Blessings
ann
What a lovely poem and how beautiful your words are.
Gr. Marijke
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Marinela, thanks so much for visiting Chopsticks and String and for your comment — you’re right — life is too short for bad books!
Your poems are lovely. I’m glad I visited!
Greetings, Marinela 🙂 I *love* your blog and your poetry is beautiful! So happy that you stopped by my blog and I thank you very much for leaving a lovely comment . . . I will be back to read more 🙂
Best Wishes,
Fiona
okay, I love your site! Love this and your writing!
Your site is a treat! You have a host of beautiful pieces. I look forward to reading more! Thank you so much again! 🙂
Hello.
To forgive is to be humble.
Lovely expressions.
I love the image.
Thanks for sharing & for your visit/comment. Much appreciated.
Bashful Lady
This piece is extremely beautiful and thought provoking. What the world needs is peace, and peace begins from within the heart of the one who wishes for it. Aho!
love it,
powerful message, well done.
Happy Holidays.
Touching………..was this written for me? Someone I love is in Heaven now. We needed to forgive and to be forgiven……waited too long to say the words that needed to be spoken. However, I’ve talked to he and God about it. I have forgiven and feel forgiven. Thank you. God Bless!
dis poem is really very nice……
it is so touching……
nyc lyn nd heart touching poem…really
amazing lyns..
Wow! Amazing I Used This For My Project Nice Work 😀
Warm Smiles..
Shane xP~
I Cannot Tell You How Much I Love It <3
Beautiful words, thank you 🙂
Ples can I share this poem to my Fb? It’s so brilliant and needs to be shared around the world!! Powerful 🙂 xx
I like these poems very much…….It is very powerful……Beautiful words……….
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Easy to check out, easy to read…heck I had to leave a commment!