Star – Shape Poem
Star – Shape Poem
Shape poems
The best things to do while writing a shape poem is choose and concentrate on the shape first. It is better if you start off with simple shapes such as a heart or a diamond then after a few tries move on to harder shapes. The poem can be about anything: a hobby, an interest or a passion. It is better if the content of the poem reflects the shape. They are great fun to write and suitable for all ages. You should try one! Here is an example I wrote:
A
Star
High up
Shone bright
Glistening above us
In the radiant moonlight
Whilst all of Gods creations rest blissfully
It floats above us and defies gravity
The night glows with its beauty
Ohm you little star!
Bringing a flame to the dark sky
As well as splendor to thy naked eye
While the sun appears to you we say goodbye
Wondering and praying
To see you again
While shining
Brightly
In the
Sky
© 2010 Marinela Reka
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Hi Marinela .. that’s great – fun and so interesting to see set out – well done! Love the idea too .. have a great Christmas and peaceful blessings with plenty of poetry in 2011 .. cheers Hilary
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Good Lord!!! Poetry is hard enough!!! I admire it a great deal, I have great respect for it, but I have a hard time understanding it and how it can also have a shape???
that is even more admirable!
Love this, Marinela, incorporating imagery in more than one way!
You are a master! I like the shape of the poem and how well you chose the words! Thanks for visiting my blog! Wishing you happy holidays!
Wow!
Very beautiful 🙂
It’s really difficult to write in such an artistic way!
what a lovely shape, it looks like a star…
remarkable talent,
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
this is great. got to try it with the kids….and great poem. well written.
Hi Marinela,
This is my first visit to your blog. Your writing reflects the passion and gift within you. Writing is a new venture for me; I hope I haven’t missed my bus.
Sending joy and blessings to you and your family.
MTJ
How interesting, I never knew that is what they were called…..Shaped Poems, love it. Thank you for sharing. Beautiful.
Hi Marinela –
Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting. 🙂
I admire people skilled in the art of poetry. I’ve written some, but my strong point is prose.
Merry Christmas,
Susan
Very fine poem, Marinela! The words match perfectly the shape in a sweet harmony.
Merry Christmas!
Marinela,
I wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and a Wonderful New Year!
Cheers!
Sonia.
May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^
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GOD Bless!^^
~Kelvin
MARINELA HERSELF A STAR… WHAT A CREATIVE MIND YOU HAVE , DEAR.. i AM LATE HERE AND LOOKED AT ALL YOUR POSTS.. WONDERFUL..
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY…MARINELA.. ! GOD BLESS!
Nice little poem Marineka…And merry christmas too…
well done and merry christmas
Lovely words…Liked the shape too..I too tried to write a shape poem.Do check it out my blog-its a rose
nice again…i love poemz
I like this, an ornament?
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