15 Responses to Wind – Haiku

1. Teri C says:

   June 20, 2011 at 11:56 pm

   I can totally relate to this as a tornado blew through our neighborhood in April. Your words are perfect.

2. harshad says:

   June 21, 2011 at 2:17 am

   Wind leaves its mark.

   So well put.

3. Hilary says:

   June 21, 2011 at 10:11 am

   Hi Marinela .. having had a lot of windy days here for 6 weeks or so .. it’s all very irritating – especially as it’s midsummer’s day!

   Cheers for now .. Hilary

4. Window Lad says:

   June 21, 2011 at 10:14 am

   …ah, true in all sense…. we do have bad weather now…and the wind is going tougher and tougher… hope it’ll end soon…

   Good day.

   ~Kelvin

5. Tammie says:

   June 21, 2011 at 1:18 pm

   yes, that is one way we see the wind.
   recently I saw a whirlwind and it took a bag high up into the sky. the wind stopped down where we were, but we could see it’s patterns as it whipped the bag around. I enjoyed your poem.

6. Gillena Cox says:

   June 21, 2011 at 2:02 pm

   ah yes the wind can be toroturous at times; well crafted in your haiku

   much love…

7. PremI says:

   June 21, 2011 at 4:22 pm

   Very well versed haiku.

8. Write Girl says:

   June 22, 2011 at 1:35 am

   Your haiku is full of truth…sadly the wind can leave a nasty mark. Nicely written!

9. Carolyn says:

   June 22, 2011 at 2:24 am

   Great poem and yes, we can relate to the wind and all its power, especially after a tornado blew through New Plymouth and seeing the damage.

   Happy week
   Carolyn

10. Amity says:

    June 22, 2011 at 6:17 am

    So very true Marinela…
    short but well done!

11. Melanie Bishop says:

    June 22, 2011 at 3:36 pm

    Ah, so wonderful to read a traditional Haiku. Lovely….

    Melanie

12. Ramesh Sood says:

    June 22, 2011 at 5:02 pm

    Lovely Haiku Marinela.. happy to see you at OSI that too with a Haiku.. I enjoyed your take.. well done..

13. Pearl Maple says:

    June 23, 2011 at 9:36 am

    Great words,
    think we have seen a bit of that
    and fab photo with all those lines and angles

14. poezi dashurie says:

    June 27, 2011 at 5:40 pm

    bravo marinela urime per blogun tuaj

15. poezi dashurie says:

    June 27, 2011 at 6:51 pm

    do te deshiroja shume nje shkembim linku me ju nese deshironi