by Marinela •
June 20, 2011 •
Haiku Poems •
Comments (15) •
Wind – Haiku
Your damage is visible
© 2011 Marinela Reka
I can totally relate to this as a tornado blew through our neighborhood in April. Your words are perfect.
Wind leaves its mark.
So well put.
Hi Marinela .. having had a lot of windy days here for 6 weeks or so .. it’s all very irritating – especially as it’s midsummer’s day!
Cheers for now .. Hilary
…ah, true in all sense…. we do have bad weather now…and the wind is going tougher and tougher… hope it’ll end soon…
yes, that is one way we see the wind.
recently I saw a whirlwind and it took a bag high up into the sky. the wind stopped down where we were, but we could see it’s patterns as it whipped the bag around. I enjoyed your poem.
ah yes the wind can be toroturous at times; well crafted in your haiku
Very well versed haiku.
Your haiku is full of truth…sadly the wind can leave a nasty mark. Nicely written!
Great poem and yes, we can relate to the wind and all its power, especially after a tornado blew through New Plymouth and seeing the damage.
So very true Marinela…
short but well done!
Ah, so wonderful to read a traditional Haiku. Lovely….
Lovely Haiku Marinela.. happy to see you at OSI that too with a Haiku.. I enjoyed your take.. well done..
think we have seen a bit of that
and fab photo with all those lines and angles
bravo marinela urime per blogun tuaj
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