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Poverty Haiku Poem

by • June 13, 2011 • Haiku Poems, Moral Poems, Poverty PoemsComments (9)4389

Poverty Haiku Poem

Poverty Haiku Poem

Poverty Haiku Poem

Haiku Poem about child poverty

Little kid

Wretched little kid
Starts to play in dirty mud
And stares at the stars

© 2011 Marinela Reka

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9 Responses to Poverty Haiku Poem

  1. This is WONDERFUL… the contrast of small, dirty mud and playing with the environment/circumstance he has, against the high, clean stars – bright with hope and possibility – and believing… dreaming of something better, though not knowing what better is… all that and more is contained in 14 words on three simple lines. Masterful!

  2. jingle says:

    Glad to see you write lovely haiku.

  3. check out short story slam today, hope to see you share.

  4. Write Girl says:

    I agree that your haiku shows such a lovely contrast between the dirty world he inhabits and the starry world up above. Beautiful haiku.

  5. Amanda Moore says:

    I wonder what he sees in those stars…. this is lovely!

  6. Regina says:

    Hi there..ya, I enjoy haiku and don’t do this often enough..your contrast was inspirational and I enjoyed the tribute to your mom!
    Wishing you a wonderful week-

  7. Leslie White says:

    Wow. Profound. I see him, this child.

  8. becca givens says:

    inspirational contrast conveyed well! thank you for sharing ~~

  9. Hyper Jake says:

    Very interesting poem Marinela. You have so much diversity here. I encourage you to join our online community- The Poetry Castle– http://www.fliprap.com/forumdisplay.php?17-The-Poetry-Castle

    where you can post poems, meet other poets, join poetry battles, post poetry videos, and become a part of a good community

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