Best Struggle Poem

by • September 6, 2009 • Freestyle Poems, Life PoemsComments (9)9274

Poem about life struggles

Best Struggle Poem

Best Struggle Poem – Life Poems

I will walk with you and face the surprises on the way

Life, why did you betray me like this?
The journey we began together was so simple and pure
Why did you change your attitude with such speed?
Now I must stress my mind about everything
I have to study very hard, so in life, I can succeed

You used to say you were peaceful and calm?
We used to spend most of our time fooling around
Picking beautiful daisies and rolling in the dirt
Today you muttered to me that: ‘life can be a vicious combat’
I could get trampled on, used and very hurt

I don’t understand why you used to declare:
‘Everyone is your friend, you have no enemies
No need to judge people they are all so kind’
Now you say: ‘Be careful who you hang around with’.
That’s another damn thing to worry my mind!

You made our journey seem so simple and amusing
But now it’s beginning to get harder by the day
You fooled me before, now you dare to lie
But, I will walk with you and face the surprises on the way
And be independent, strong, and happy until I die

© 2009 Marinela Reka

Marinela Reka,short poems

Poem about life and struggles

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9 Responses to Poem about life struggles

  1. samson says:

    hi marinela reka..
    ur poem interesting ..
    giving a sense of reality today..
    and the contrast of what was years ago..
    keep it up.

  2. Hi! I was surfing and found your blog post… nice! I love your poetry. 🙂 Cheers! Sandra. R.

  3. Hi, Marinela (o; Thank you for visiting my writing blog. I’m eager to know what you think of the book Hailstones and Halibut Bones by Mary O’Neill.
    I’ve enjoyed reading your poetry, So gifted!

  4. Marinela says:

    Thank you so much, samson, sandraraven15 and Sheryl Crawford for your lovely comments. As always, they pleasant my heart 🙂

  5. ANUSHA says:

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MARINELA REKA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. A wonderful poem Marinela…Pretty much we take life for granted but don’t realize that life challenges us at every turn for only he who has seen the darkness before the dawn can fully appreciate the first rays of the Sun…A wonderful poem this, about life and living…Keep it up…

  7. Well yes, that’s life for us… love how well you’ve captured it in a poem, Marinela 😉

  8. Amity says:

    A very touching poem Marinela…:(
    But I like the fighting spirit which kept you through life…
    Making great choices by being independent, strong and happy till the end of life!

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