10 Responses to Diamante poem about light and dark

1. ayala says:

   May 12, 2011 at 6:26 pm

   Lovely!

2. becca says:

   May 12, 2011 at 6:32 pm

   I like this one very much – I like the contrast and the way you used different color to further illustrate the difference!! Bravo!

3. Versebender says:

   May 12, 2011 at 6:38 pm

   Great job. A perfect example of matching subject matter with form. Bravo! Vb

4. Kim Nelson says:

   May 12, 2011 at 9:41 pm

   I really like the numerous adjectives and the change in font color, as well as the overall shape. Nice work.

5. Liz says:

   May 13, 2011 at 12:05 am

   Nice poem! ^^

6. Sara Healy says:

   May 13, 2011 at 7:09 pm

   I love this one. I like how you made the contrast with words. It feels like a video of the sunrise and sunset, but in fast mode. Well, at least how it reads to me:~)

   I must confess, I had to look up the word “Stygian,” but it’s a perfect fit.

   I’m really enjoying reading your poetry and learning about the different types.

7. lucychili says:

   May 13, 2011 at 11:30 pm

   nice symmetry

8. jinksy says:

   May 14, 2011 at 2:01 pm

   And isn’t stygian a wonderful word? 🙂

9. Pietro says:

   May 14, 2011 at 5:46 pm

   Marinela, this is a very beautiful poem with the two parts (Light / Night) fitting together perfectly!

10. bob says:

    May 17, 2011 at 8:47 pm

    nice