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Wind – Haiku

Invisible wind
Your damage is visible
Making history

Copyright © 2011 Marinela Reka

 

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15 Responses to Wind – Haiku

  1. Teri C says:

    I can totally relate to this as a tornado blew through our neighborhood in April. Your words are perfect.

  2. harshad says:

    Wind leaves its mark.

    So well put.

  3. Hilary says:

    Hi Marinela .. having had a lot of windy days here for 6 weeks or so .. it’s all very irritating – especially as it’s midsummer’s day!

    Cheers for now .. Hilary

  4. Window Lad says:

    …ah, true in all sense…. we do have bad weather now…and the wind is going tougher and tougher… hope it’ll end soon…

    Good day.

    ~Kelvin

  5. Tammie says:

    yes, that is one way we see the wind.
    recently I saw a whirlwind and it took a bag high up into the sky. the wind stopped down where we were, but we could see it’s patterns as it whipped the bag around. I enjoyed your poem.

  6. Gillena Cox says:

    ah yes the wind can be toroturous at times; well crafted in your haiku

    much love…

  7. PremI says:

    Very well versed haiku.

  8. Write Girl says:

    Your haiku is full of truth…sadly the wind can leave a nasty mark. Nicely written!

  9. Carolyn says:

    Great poem and yes, we can relate to the wind and all its power, especially after a tornado blew through New Plymouth and seeing the damage.

    Happy week
    Carolyn

  10. Amity says:

    So very true Marinela…
    short but well done!

  11. Ah, so wonderful to read a traditional Haiku. Lovely….

    Melanie

  12. Ramesh Sood says:

    Lovely Haiku Marinela.. happy to see you at OSI that too with a Haiku.. I enjoyed your take.. well done..

  13. Pearl Maple says:

    Great words,
    think we have seen a bit of that
    and fab photo with all those lines and angles

  14. bravo marinela urime per blogun tuaj

  15. do te deshiroja shume nje shkembim linku me ju nese deshironi

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