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magic shoes poem

by • April 11, 2010 • Feeling Poems, Life Poems, Moral Poems, Motivational Poems, Spoken Word PoemsComments (71)9552

Magical shoes poem

We always need something to remind us who we are and how we should treat others in this short life. The shoes in this poem represent the potential we have to make the world a better place.
Let the poem do the talking πŸ™‚

Magical Shoes

Every body has a pair of shoes
That makes anger disappear
They turn hate into love
Make you brave, not to fear

They lead your feet to the homeless
So that you can make their day
Make the world a nicer place
To live in and to stay

With them you are not selfish
But all you try to do is give
Make you realise that life is short
So we should all simply live

Every one has these shoes
No bodies have ever gone
So why do some thoughtless people
Not put their shoes on?

Β© 2010 Marinela Reka

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71 Responses to Magical shoes poem

  1. Stan Ski says:

    Nice reminder – I’m going for a walk today if it’s the last thing I do…

  2. Ramesh Sood says:

    You really rock….what a way to push people to GIVE..

    God gives
    And man lives
    And the man who gives
    In him god lives…

  3. kenneth says:

    What a delightful poem. I really like the concept of a certain pair of shoes that bring out the best of us. It’s a complex idea so simply created – thanks for this, and thanks also for visiting my blog.

  4. shashidhar says:

    Shines to inspire,the Magical Shoes.Thank you:)

  5. brian miller says:

    really a wonderful verse with a great point…putting on my shoes today…

  6. Nationstips says:

    Well done. I am most definitely going to find my shoes today and put them on when I go out. Wonderful work – keep up the great writing skills.
    Nationtips

  7. ayu says:

    a pleasant poem to read…:)

    (ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

  8. caravanserai says:

    The stray dogs roaming
    On the streets in the market stalls
    All alone finding food to survive
    The breeding then the owners throw away

    In the day; in the night
    It makes no difference when need to survive
    Sniffing food throwing on the floor or streets
    Sometimes rummaging around in the dustbins

    The stray dogs fear in their eyes
    Any significant goodness seems gone
    In the dogs’ minds surviving is the game
    Sniffing around care not what people say

    Study the dogs the significant of human lives
    When you are poor, living hands to mouths
    The fear of the unknown always linger in their minds
    Dare not aggressively pursuing afraid to know

    The rejection and run down of dignity
    It breaks a person losing control
    Living in fear when money is the game
    Without it what life will be?

    To turn around life
    One has to forget
    The background of a living
    Try it harder forget about letdown

    It is still holding true
    β€œNo venture no gain”
    One shouldn’t be a stray dog
    Losing all hope for a home

    12/4/10 10.42pm take care

  9. Marinela says:

    Thank You everyone for all off your time! You are putting your magical shoes on by leaving me such meaningful refreshing comments! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem and I am very grateful for you compliments!
    Caravanserai I really loved your poem! It was full of emotion and very touching! Very well done your great! πŸ˜€
    Thank you all!
    Marinela! x

  10. Dee says:

    wonderful idea – I’m going to go put my shoes on now πŸ™‚

  11. Old Grizz says:

    I have a pair of those shoes. Not the colorful ones like in your post. It would be nice if more people would wear theirs. Like you say, “we all have a pair”. Unfortunately to many people shove them in the back of their closet. Nice post

  12. Marinela says:

    Old Grizz you are so true! Some people do shove them in the back of their closet but i hope they have got the power to take them out and put them on as soon as possible! Before they like being barefoot πŸ™‚
    Thank you for commenting πŸ˜€
    I am glad that you liked it Adesi!
    Ha Ha everyone should put their shoes on Dee πŸ˜€
    Thank you guys πŸ˜€

  13. Julia Smith says:

    I like the drawing of the cheery shoes. And your poem strolls along with joy.

  14. Raaji says:

    aww.. this is inspiring πŸ™‚

  15. Tumblewords says:

    Yes! Good reminder…

  16. Amity says:

    Modesty aside my dear, I feel like I am always using that magical shoes and it gives me immeasurable pleasure after extending kind deeds!

  17. Sarah says:

    This is lovely, hun! It’s definitely inspiring and really gets you thinking about what you have done and are doing in life. And it makes you ponder and to be sure that you’re always selfless and not selfish.

    Very thought provoking even though it’s very simple to grasp. Thanks for sharing, sweets. πŸ™‚

  18. what a lovely idea, the magical shoes!

  19. Marinela says:

    I am so pleased you all liked my poem,
    And the bright image of the trainers πŸ™‚
    I guess it does make us think about life more!
    Thank you all for the heartwarming comments!
    I wish you all the best πŸ™‚
    Marinela

  20. I had just run into the word cinquain and had planned to look it up. Since I came by here I found out. What a wonderful place is blogland.
    QMM

  21. Marinela says:

    Thanks,
    I am glad that you like it QMM
    Marinela! πŸ˜€

  22. alady'slife says:

    Shoes are very comfortable, soft, warm, and protect you from the elements.
    If people would be like shoes helping and protecting those around them,the world most certainly would benefit a lot.
    (As long as there are no strings attached lol)
    πŸ™‚

  23. Anvilcloud says:

    I like your unique approach — shoes rather than feet.

  24. Yousei Hime says:

    You’ve put to action the heart. Very nice. Thank you for sharing it.

  25. Why indeed? Very inspiring and a good reminder for us all.

  26. I love the way you inspire us with your words. It reminds us all to ‘put on our shoes’ and do something good today.

    Have a great Wednesday! Thanks for stopping by.

    I am old enough to be your grandmother. I see you were born in ’96..

  27. naquillity says:

    good morning Marinela~ i’m sorry for my late reply on your blog. my computer has been in and out since Friday. i think i’m back online for awhile, grin.

    your poem is very inspirational. giving to another is the heart of what makes the world go round. we never know how we’re going to touch someone’s life because of our giving. it can only turn out good.

    i also love the drawing. beautifully rendered. hope all is well. have a great day.

  28. Pravin Nair says:

    Hey, that was beautiful n pleasant!Keep it up.

    also wld like to invite you to my page at:

    http://www.assorted-platter.blogspot.com

    ur opinion wld be invaluable!tx.

  29. marinela says:

    hahaha that’s true alady’slife the world would benefit! I am grateful that you visited my blog, thanks!

    I am glad you liked the poem Yousei and Robin! I really appreciate your comments!

    Patti you are putting on your magical shoes by leaving me such a lovely comment! Many thanks. Is my pleasure to stop by πŸ˜€

    Its no problem Naquillity don’t worry about it! Thanks for taking time to visit my page and i am very thankful for your great comment!

    Thank you pravin! I will stop by your page!

    WOW everyone its heartwarming to know that so many people like my poetry! Thank you all so much for making my day! πŸ˜€

    All the best Marinela x

  30. wordwand says:

    hi ? I ‘ve added your blog to my blogroll if you don’t mind cos I want to keep track of your poems.good luck.

  31. Andy Sewina says:

    Yeah cool! those shoes can make you walk a mile in the opposite direction. well said, we all need a good kicking sometimes!

  32. Emmanuel says:

    This is splendid…really is…cheers!

  33. Marinela says:

    Great! Thank you wordwand of course i don’t mind, i am very grateful! πŸ™‚
    Hahaha very true Andy we all do! Thanks for the lovely comment!
    I am glad that you enjoyed it Emmanuel, thank you for taking your time to write the comment! πŸ˜€
    Thank you all!
    Marinela!x

  34. Leo says:

    its nice to see such a beauty and thought in your words, and a passion for thought provoking poetry so early.. beautifully written..

  35. Cute sketch and a cute poem πŸ™‚
    Enjoyed reading it. πŸ™‚

  36. Leslie says:

    Love the shoes and what your poem does for them or is it what the shoes do for the poem

    Nicely done!!!

  37. Maggie May says:

    Great poem.
    Wearing slippers at the moment as I’m not too well. Looking forward to putting my shoes on by the weekend.

    Nuts in May

  38. Suzicate says:

    What a lovely sentiment. Wouldn’t the world be a beautiful palce? I try to wear mine each day. You did a great job with this.

  39. Tina Hagger says:

    I have a pair indeed. They are purple! Good work.

  40. Luisa Doraz says:

    I like the way that I could walk along on this one. Very nice poem and well written. πŸ™‚ Have fun today.

  41. Marinela says:

    Thank you everyone!
    Yes your right Suzicate the world would be a better place πŸ™‚
    Your all so kind leaving such lovely comments it has made me very joyful this holiday! I am glad that you all liked it πŸ˜€
    Once again Thank you!
    Warmly
    Marinela!
    x

  42. Mitchell says:

    Thanks, I am thrilled to meet another poet around my age… although I am just starting (compared to you… wow!). I really love this website design. I was wondering if I could add you to my “Poet Friends & Other Links” section on my blog? If you accept and feel so enclined… you could add me to πŸ™‚

    Thanks,

    Mitchell

  43. Thomma Lyn says:

    Wow, this is an absolute delight. πŸ™‚ I loved the entire poem, and these words, especially: “Make you realise that life is short
    So we should all simply live.”

  44. I love this!

    I always keep my shoes next to my rose colored glasses. Those shoes and shades are the best accessories.

  45. Cute poem! It’s great to introduce little kids to the world of poetry so they can learn to express themselves! Thanks!

  46. @caravanserai, Your poem reminds me of a song by the Be Good Tanyas; it’s called “Dogsong.” Lovely.

    @Marinela, This is a sweet poem. I like the way you’ve used shoes, which are the necessities of travel. And we are all traveling through this life. Also, your blog is beautiful. Nice design!

  47. Marinela says:

    I am glad that you liked it Mitchell, feel free to add my website πŸ˜€
    It would be great! Thanks for the comment!

    I really do feel much better to see all of the lovely comments you all leave! I am very glad to see that you all liked my magical shoes poem! And thank you for spending your time to comment on my work πŸ™‚

    Marinela x

  48. Avanti says:

    Such a delightful, delightful site Marinela! I’m coming back again! πŸ™‚

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