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Love Poem from the Heart

by • August 27, 2010 • Love Poems, Simply The Best, Teen PoemsComments (29)4254

Love Poem from the Heart

What if my love is never more than just a song?

My love flows in your veins
Like the blood that we need so much
And it is vicious like electricity
It can hurt you at first touch

It crawls up your heart like a spider
So quiet, crafty and precise
And can freeze your fragile soul
Just like the miraculous solid: ice

More than that just like a song
That you can’t get out your mind
It can control you to the limit
That you’re emotionally blind

But what if my love
is never more than just a song?
What if you never write the lyrics?
Just happily sing along

Or maybe one lonely day
My love will be out of tune
Will it sink to the bottom of your heart?
Like a worthless balloon

Or just like the songs today
Will it get out of date?
And will my love once filled with joy
Be quickly filled with hate?

© 2010 Marinela Reka

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29 Responses to Love Poem from the Heart

  1. Boonie says:

    Nice to welcome you back to the blogosphere again.
    This is a powerful piece. Thanks for posting it.

    All the best, Boonie

  2. Life tips says:

    Amazing poem Marinela!

  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    Welcome back Marinela, oh, you were missed so much.. lovely poem thos

    Nothing will ever go wrong
    Your love shall be so strong
    No it will never go or sink
    With faith sing your lovesong..

    Well Marineal.. thanks for your viisit to my 101st post.. did you miss 100th.. I invite you to read that too.. god bless..hope you are fine and well. your long absence was a bit uncomfortable.. girl..

  4. Pietro says:

    Welcome back, Marinela! Very nice poem. I find really amazing the rhymes precise/ice and tune/balloon.
    Happy weekend!

  5. Petty Witter says:

    So glad that I was able to visit today as I had some wonderful verse to catch up on. Is love in the air with you? These feel so heartfelt I can’t help but think that.

  6. Travis says:

    This is terrific. Your imagery captures the vulnerability and doubt so well.

  7. It is a beautiful poem. The questions put by you are so serious. I kind of became speechless… Power of words, you see! Thumbs Up!!! 🙂

  8. ayu says:

    so far this is my favorite among your poems! so beautiful! 😀

  9. Bea Sempere says:

    This was a wonderful poem. Filled with lots of emotion, so true in thoughts and life.

  10. bkmackenzie says:

    nice piece..I can feel the emotion in this ..thanks for the visit…happy to reconnect…bkm

  11. Claudia says:

    liked your poem – and i agree – love can get out of tune – but the good thing – after a bit of adaption, it can sound lovely again…smiles

  12. brian says:

    love can get out of tune…and while it takes effort a lot of fun can be had in finding harmony again…

  13. Elizabeth says:

    Like some of your imagery very much, like the spider and the blood flowing through veins. And like your questions and immediate responses. Nice poem,

    Elizabeth

  14. pamela says:

    Wonderful post!
    Pamela

  15. Wow, this is a beautiful poem

  16. Nice pace, great imagery, and sweet rhymes.

    I’m impressed that someone so young has such a handle on language and has even gotten published! I didn’t start writing till I was in high school. If you’ve got any advice on how to get published, feel free to visit my site to chat or email me at lestismitethee@gmail.com

    Cheers!

  17. Lisa says:

    This is a beautiful poem. I seem to read things as I need them. BTW I love the theme of your blog. Very cool!

  18. Wonderful words … wonderful poem!

  19. Jessica says:

    Thanks for your visit. You have quite a site here and I was amazed by your newspaper clippings – famous already!
    I like this poem.
    Um..one question…if he doesn’t ‘write the lyrics’ how can he ‘sing along’?

  20. Wow,,,what a gr8 piece….nice poem…:)

  21. Mary says:

    You are one very talented young poet. I took a look at the newspaper articles too. Keep writing. I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, and I also thank you for visiting my blog as well.

  22. Marinela says:

    Hello everyone 🙂
    It is nice to be back and see all of the lovely comments that you have left me. I am glad that you like this poem. Thank you for the encouragement.

    Ramesh that is a lovely poem like always. Very well done!

    Jessica if love really was a song then you can write your own lyrics, but it is nice for someone else’s love to join and for you to write the lyrics together.

    Once again thank you, I am very grateful. 🙂

    Warmly,

    Marinela x

  23. bob says:

    nice poem, you are real talent girl!

  24. naquillity says:

    incredible writing. love is such a universal feeling for us all and you’ve capture the easiness and hardness of it quite well. falling in love and staying in love are equal partners of opposite determination. hope all is well.

  25. Arti says:

    True Love can never ever go wrong!
    Your words have depth, Marinela and strike a chord deep somewhere…
    Beautiful:)

  26. Lisa says:

    I have two awards for you. If you’d like to accept, you can find them here: http://frayedges.wordpress.com/2010/09/06/blogger-awards/

  27. wind says:

    Hey there!
    Thank you for passing by!
    I am glad to meet your blog!
    You are so talented!
    Congratulation!
    Regards

  28. Life Poems says:

    That’s love that i know of that you have just described. It’s something that you can never be certain about. We love, we gamble. Some will win and others will lose.

    Another great post Marinela.

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