“What am I talking about?”

1. On July 11th, 2010 at 11:55 pm bkmackenzie Says:

   Thank you Marinela for joining us again at Monday’s Child – wonder post about change and life and all its questions…..please read what the others who have posted at Monday’s Child….blessings…please join us again next week…..blessings..bkm

2. On July 12th, 2010 at 6:36 am Boonsong Says:

   This seems very contemporary – very enjoyable too.
   Thanks for this.

   All the best, Boonsong

3. On July 12th, 2010 at 6:44 am keshav Says:

   Made me smile. Thanks!

4. On July 12th, 2010 at 8:56 am Hilary Says:

   Hi Marinela .. thanks for coming past my blog – and this poem is a wonderful story of life .. such a weave of ideas .. I loved it ..

   Great to be able to have writings like these for remembrances .. and be able to give out poems to friends and family for special occasions ..

   Thanks – this was lovely .. Hilary

5. On July 12th, 2010 at 9:59 am Petty Witter Says:

   Very cleverly done, I love how one line leads to another.

6. On July 12th, 2010 at 4:04 pm Julia Smith Says:

   I like these lines best:

   ‘You cut chicken with a knife
   What is the true meaning of life?
   There is a meaning to everything
   Wow a bird with just one wing!’

   Very whimsical, but it hints at something deeper.

7. On July 12th, 2010 at 4:23 pm Sarah Says:

   haha wow. i really enjoyed this. made me laugh a little, and it’s past 12 midnight here! i had to write one of these once and it was so difficult! you’re so amazing at this, y’know!

8. On July 12th, 2010 at 9:09 pm Marinela Says:

   Thank you so much everyone for the lovely comments!
   Haha I am glad it made you laugh Sarah!
   It is nice to know that all of you enjoyed my poem!
   Kind regards,
   Marinela x

9. On July 13th, 2010 at 1:33 am Emmanuel Ibok Says:

   Beautiful flows and lovely rhymes…Nice!

10. On July 13th, 2010 at 3:53 am Pietro Says:

    So beautiful, Marinela! The lines run after each other in a nice sequence of new images.
    Happy Tuesday!

11. On July 13th, 2010 at 5:37 am dutchbaby Says:

    I like the child-like stream-of-consciousness feeling to this poem and also how the tail of one line becomes the head for the next.

12. On July 13th, 2010 at 7:48 am Ramesh Sood Says:

    Well, Marinela , a little late to be here.. but then what a lovely poem you have written this time..and I am not able to comment in the form of a rhyme for a change and perhaps a bit strange.. for you..isn’t it true.. Lo, behold, what I told and what has become.. wow, That’s fun.. your poem made me happy.

13. On July 13th, 2010 at 8:35 pm Nessa Says:

    Your poem feels like it’s dancing.

14. On July 13th, 2010 at 8:40 pm bob Says:

    i like this

15. On July 14th, 2010 at 6:07 pm Talon Says:

    This had me smiling throughout. It’s like someone just letting all their thoguhts pour our without a filter. I loved it!

16. On July 16th, 2010 at 1:44 am Jingle Says:

    truth is hard to take,
    but you speak it,
    lovely post!

17. On July 16th, 2010 at 7:37 pm Leslie White Says:

    Looks like you took one line and the next thought fed from it. Much like some people I listen to go on and on, just because they need listening to. Cool poem, Marinela!

18. On July 18th, 2010 at 5:37 pm edpilolla Says:

    this is so playful and fun. really enjoyed it. my smile grew to the end:)

19. On July 22nd, 2010 at 10:05 pm tosy Says:

    you are wonderful girl ,i really enjoyed it just as everybody else
    keep going you are great