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Sisters Love

June14

I Wrote this when I was 12 years old to tell my sister how much I appreciate her, and all of the things she done, and still does for me.

I adore you so much my sister

You are my right hand
My world, my sweet heart
In my very busy life
You are the main part

You’re my inspiration in life
You help me enjoy my youth
My only guardian angel
In you I see only truth

If I had just one chance
This may sound a little strange
But maybe for a day or two
Places we could change

Please be my younger sister
And I will be the older one
Just like you do to me
I will fill your life with fun

I will put up with annoying things
Things that at the moment I seem to do
Like take your perfume to school
And burn your cloths with super glue

When you get scared I will hold you
And tell you that it’s going to be fine
When you want to look good
I will let you wear cloths of mine

This is all the things you do for me
I hope you know how grateful I am
From know on to be a better sister
I promise to do all I can

I adore you so much my sister
I hope you believe me this is true
Quite frankly what I want to say
Is that I really do love you!

Sisters love

posted under Family, Sisters-Family

26 Comments to

“Sisters Love”

On June 14th, 2010 at 9:50 pm bob Says:
nice one
On June 14th, 2010 at 10:53 pm Leslie White Says:
I am an older sister. You have written a very beautiful poem to your older sister, Marinela. What a beautiful gift!
On June 14th, 2010 at 11:45 pm D.S. Lear Says:
As an older sister also this is indeed a very heartfelt tribute! Nice work!
On June 15th, 2010 at 5:08 am Pietro Says:
“You are my right hand
My world, my sweet heart
In my very busy life
You are the main part”
This first quatrain is really an excellent prelude to the whole beautiful poem.
Have a great week, Marinela
On June 15th, 2010 at 8:18 pm william Says:
beautiful, as it should be sisterly love
On June 16th, 2010 at 2:24 am Travis Says:
I’m an older brother of a younger sister. This is a good poem.
On June 16th, 2010 at 9:35 am Karan A Says:
It made me remember my elder sister and the pranks I played with her1
I loved the poem very much!
On June 16th, 2010 at 12:38 pm Mirella McCracken Says:
Your poem made me cry! I have a younger sister and she is the love of my life (after my husband:)
Very nice poem Marinella!
You are so talented.
Take care beautiful princess
Mirella
On June 16th, 2010 at 1:27 pm wordwand Says:
lovely! A nice poem indeed.I have one sister and I love her very much , she is my second mom in a way .well done Marinela.
http://wordwand.wordpress.com/2010/06/16/void-soul/#respond
On June 16th, 2010 at 1:27 pm Petty Witter Says:
What lovely words. I love my sister because she is my sister, we would never be friends if we weren’t sisters.
On June 16th, 2010 at 1:27 pm wordwand Says:
I nominated you here http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/14/the-celebrate-poet-of-may-award-nominations/#comment-12326
i hope you are interested in this event .
On June 16th, 2010 at 2:27 pm Nensa Moon Says:
Very nice poem!!
it’s revealed how you loved your sister…
Thanks for showing us.
On June 16th, 2010 at 3:14 pm Life tips Says:
Simply Beautiful.
On June 16th, 2010 at 5:30 pm Marinela Says:
Hello Everyone,
It is lovely to know that all of you have got such a close relationship with your sisters and have your sisters love.
Thank you so much for the delightful comments, they really made my day.
I am so grateful!
Many thanks,
Marinela
On June 16th, 2010 at 8:55 pm Regina Says:
If we could all have sisters like this! A precious thing..nice uplifting words!
On June 17th, 2010 at 12:10 am Emmanuel Ibok Says:
Sweet and thoughtful tribute…I’m sure she enjoyed it. You have a lovely soft side. Nice work…Cheers!!!
On June 17th, 2010 at 9:06 pm nirmal Says:
Hi! Marinela,

so beautufully you have expressed your sweet love to your sister…..
really sweet of you…..
On June 19th, 2010 at 9:10 am Windowlad Says:
You did have a wonderful tribute for your sister… i really enjoyed readin’ it… i have 2 younger sisters and their both naughty yet each made me happy in a variety of ways… thanks for sharin’ this poem!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

>kelvin
On June 19th, 2010 at 7:04 pm Deeptesh Says:
Lovely poems u have here. Will drop by for more. This one really reflects true sisterly affection!
On June 19th, 2010 at 11:11 pm Jingle Says:
amazing job….

please pick any awards from my post titled week 23 poetry awards…
5 for you.
On June 22nd, 2010 at 3:50 pm Jingle Says:
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/22/the-celebrate-poet-of-may-award-and-more/

one poetry award,
three general awards,
Happy Tuesday!
On June 25th, 2010 at 7:30 pm Marvin Tejada Says:
dear marinela,

of all your poems, this have touched my heart the best. i simply flat out admiring your courage to say the lovely words to your sister. it is seldom that a sibling can express that deep devotion to a brother or a sister. i have never done that so far.

all the best to you.
On July 2nd, 2010 at 1:37 am Laura Says:
As an older sister, I thought this was so sweet and genuine. I even showed my sister. It’s amazing the bond that can never be broken. Thank you for publishing it.
On July 3rd, 2010 at 12:46 am swapna Says:
I have two sisters and its just wonderful to have them in life. Good one Marinela.
On July 3rd, 2010 at 5:18 pm keshav Says:
On July 9th, 2010 at 4:05 pm marta walewska Says:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i have a older sis and this poem rockzzzzzzzz <3<3<3<3<3 tat is so sweettttttttttttttttt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww