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by • June 19, 2010 • A Poem of Poems, Loop Poetry, Poetry WorkshopComments (32)639

Loop Poetry

Loop poetry is easy to write and especially fun to read. It is very cleaver the way that they are formed. There is no certain amount of syllables in a line or stanzas in the poem. In every stanza that you write The last word of line 1 is the first word of line 2, then the last word of line 2 is the first word of line 3, then the last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4, and so on. The rhyming in each line is as follows : ABCB. I wrote one about ‘poems’ and I hope that you enjoy reading it.

Poems

Some poems are fun to read
Read them and you will be amused
Amused at all of the cleaver words
Words that have been used

Other poems are long
Long and tell a story
Story that can scare
Scare you because they’re gory

Some poems are full of emotion
Emotion from the soul
Soul that is set out to inspire
Inspire others is its goal

Others are simply to get rid
Rid of the pain inside
Inside your heart aches
Aches of the tenderness you can’t hide

There are some for the one
One you like the most
Most likely to love the person
Person so beautiful you may boast

There are different types of poems
Poems for fun and to express
Express it by writing it
It may lead to progress

© 2010 Marinela Reka

Loop Poetry

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32 Responses to Loop Poetry

  1. Jingle says:

    well put,
    thank you for stopping by.

  2. jel says:

    thank you for stopping by and for your nice comment .

    you do have a giift, here with your Poetry! :)

    And I really like the background of your blog.

  3. ayu says:

    wow..it’s the first time ive read a loop poetry and youre right..it sounds fun to do!!^^

  4. Windowlad says:

    OoOooh… that was soo cool… you write with soo much ease my friend… and you are really talented… keep up the gift!!!:D

    A blessed Sunday!!!:)

    >Kelvin

  5. Hilary says:

    Hi Marinela .. it’s good to know about loop poetry – I’d never heard the term before .. thank you .. have a great week .. Hilary

  6. IdleMind says:

    Wonderful experiment with verses! loved the blog page of yours!!

  7. Petty Witter says:

    Very clever. I’m amazed that there are so many different types of verse out there – up until now Id always thought of all verse as either poetry or lymerics.

  8. Pietro says:

    Hello Marinela! Very well written indeed! “Loop poetry” is absolutely new for me: “loop” surely because equal words run after each other incessantly through the whole poem.
    Happy new week!

  9. william says:

    excellent insight into styles of writing, loved it xxx

  10. Cleverly done. I liked it.

  11. Nessa says:

    This was fun. i’m going to keep it in mind for future use.

  12. Weasel says:

    Wonderfully written! Thanks for sharing!

    -Weasel

  13. Robin says:

    Wonderful and beautiful work…I love now knowing about a loop poem..Thank You so much..!

  14. Boonsong says:

    This is fascinating – very clever too.
    I love your blog. I see that I can learn a lot here.

    Thanks for visiting my blog.

    Best wishes, Boonsong

  15. Julia Smith says:

    What a fun form! I’m definitely going to take it out for a spin. I loved this verse of yours:

    ‘Some poems are full of emotion
    Emotion from the soul
    Soul that is set out to inspire
    Inspire others is its goal’

  16. I’ve seen this style before but never knew the name of it. And you rhymed too! Nice. Thanks for the knowledge. Enjoyed reading your poetry.

  17. Life tips says:

    I really enjoyed this poem Marinela, you are such a talent!

  18. jabblog uk says:

    This looks such fun! Well done :-)

  19. deadpoet88 says:

    This really does sound like a fun poem! I never knew that such poetry had a name. Great piece and very well written!

  20. Very cool! I’ve not heard of loop poetry, but I liked this.

    Thanks :)

  21. Julie says:

    Hi, Marinela. It’s very nice to meet you. This is great fun. I’m going to share the idea with some people, and I will give them the link to your site. I’m supposed to do a workshop for people who have never written poetry, and I have a feeling they will love doing a loop poem. Thank you!

  22. Jeques says:

    This is a very interesting poetry form. Loop poetry is new to me. The beauty of this form is the flow of words like a stream creating such lovely sounds as the words flow hitting boulders of thoughts blended to a body of idea that the poem wanting to express.

    I like the simpleness of the subject in this poem, discussing about different poetry forms like taking the readers on a tour down the streams enriching the readers in the process. It’s like the river reaching an ocean of information in the end.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

  23. Leslie White says:

    Loop poetry sounds so difficult. You have used it well, Marinela!

  24. Marinela says:

    Hello everyone :)
    Its so lovely to know that all of you have enjoyed reading my poem. I also love reading out loop poems. It just sounds so elegant and lyrical! Its always my pleasure to read your work!

    I am very grateful for all of your great compliments and your support!

    Thank you,

    Marinela! :)

  25. Ramesh Sood says:

    Ah, what a lovely write on different poems
    Poems flowing from your pen are so beautiful
    Beautiful too are your Heart and Mind
    Mind thinks, heart edits, thoughts plentiful..

    Well done, Merinela.. I was away , hence late to comment..You inspire, Girl! I am learning..

  26. R.S. Mallari says:

    This one is really fun to read as you’ve said, I might try to make one like this, your site is not only entertaining but full of information also.

  27. Vivek says:

    wow , how you come up with super ..piece of work ..amazing …you are truly blessed…

    keep it up :)

    take care

    have a gr8 time

    with Love
    Vivek

  28. tAl says:

    never heard of loop poetry before..fantastic!
    im amazed with how you put art in writing those words..and turn them into a masterpiece..
    ur site is informative for poem lovers …
    ill try making one…
    tnx so much! :)

  29. DEZMOND says:

    Oh, what a clever loop poem ;)

  30. Keep posting stuff like this i really like it

  31. poet girl says:

    Hi , I like you love writing poetry , and I feel that you’re poem is very well written . It’s great to know that you have started at such a young age and are doing so well .
    keep it up !
    Do check out my site : http://www.a-different-train-of-thought.blogspot.com

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